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kavita
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We have already seen many creative minds in silchar.com. I am dedicating this thread to all the unknown poets. Please share your poems here. I am starting with one of mine. I know, its quality is not good. Prothom kabita bhala oile bhala laaglo ne dekhte, kintu lubh samlaite paarlaam na. please forgive me for that.
Oi shuno---
danabhanga gangchiler kator artonaad
Dhulo-jorjorito mrityur ashonkaay,
Ondhokaar hoye aase gholate prithibi.
Bhul korechhilo---
Swopno dekhechhilo asim akasher shunyotaar.
Bhenge dite cheyechhilo neel simana,
Mugdho hoyechhilo kojagori purnimar swopnil soundoryye.
Haay gangchil---
Sonda maatir gondho aaj tomar thikana,
Bhule gele swopno dekhte.
sojyo hoy shaluker byanger haasi!
Naa gangchil---
tumi protibade mukhor how
Mitiye daao oi sadakalor gondi
swopno dekho notun prithibir. |
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bulBULI
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Re: kavita
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02/04/05 at 00:53:24 » |
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Bull SHit : |
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bulBULI
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Re: kavita
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02/04/05 at 04:36:55 » |
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LOSE motion ??? ???
what does that mean susu mita
Bull Sh*t |
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bulBULI
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Re: kavita
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02/04/05 at 04:37:33 » |
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LOSE motion ??? ???
what does that mean susu mita
Bull Sh*t |
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bulBULI
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Re: kavita
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02/04/05 at 04:40:14 » |
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FROM STOMACH DISORDERS AND LOSE MOTION ??? ???
"LOSE MOTION " what soes that mean SUSU Mita |
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Brown_eyes
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Re: kavita
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02/05/05 at 00:54:50 » |
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Bhai Ravi,Tumar kobita ta reba excellent hoiche.Aami oboshyo janina tumi bhai na boin.Naam dekhiya karur gender assume kora uchit na,nani?Bhul hoile shudhraiya diyo.Kintu tumar reba bout protibha aache."aandu gof" ta je bhabe compose korcho,seta tulonabiheen.Ekta kotha,tumi ki Jeebanananda khub beshi poro?Tomar ajantei hoito ,you started sounding like Jeebanananda Dash.Aaro kicchu bhalo kobitar opekkhay roilam. |
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