Sandipan Suklabaidya
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GOLPO r aasor
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02/09/04 at 16:16:33 » |
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Hi,
Amra ei adda t bohut kichchui lekhi… moner kotha, premer kotha, antakshori t gaan, laga-lagi aro koto ta. Taile amra golpo lekhina kene? Raja r golpo, Rani r golpo, Pori r golpo, Bhut er golpo, Bhalobasa r golpo, Gandhi mela r golpo… etc tec…
I m starting off with a “byartho premer golpo”……….
8:30 p.m., a windy chilly night, it was raining too in tandem. By the time the road has become almost empty. He is driving back to home. Suddenly he sees someone standing under the bus shelter, trying to protect herself from rain.
“Priya !”, he wonders when he gets closer to her, “what is she doing here now?”
Yes, Priya……… his first love, whom he met in the college, with the course of time they came close to each other, they dreamt of a life together…. full of love, laughter and faith. But somebody in the heaven thought the other way round. She had to marry someone else. He could never imagine such a climax, while everything had appeared to be in his favour. Whose fault this was, is still a tale untold. Perhaps she had to pay the cost of being the eldest daughter of her parents. He did never get the opportunity to ask her, what actually went wrong, nor he got any chance to meet her. And to be very honest he didn’t even want to meet her. In fact, he didn’t want to create any disturbance in her supposed to be happy married life. Probably she still occupies an important corner of his heart. Now, seeing her here, he could not turn his face off, he offers her a lift….
“ eto raate ekhane ki korcho? Kothay jabe bolo… ami drop kore dichchi…”
Now its her turn to wonder.. “ who is he? Isn’t it Rahul? Yes, it is.”
She is feeling uncomfortable, how can she accept the offer… having had an affaire which could not be transformed into a relationship, she is hesitant to face him even. Moreover, though it is 21st century, but still the character of women are being brought to the book. Her husband is in outstation, in such a situation what would her in-laws think… what if, they gets it otherwise? But standing alone here would also not be a wise decision. At last she decides to get into the car… she used to admire him for his strong character and had faith in him. But none of them are looking at each other’s eyes. He is driving looking straight at the road only. So was she. Though its not their first experience of traveling together, the only difference is that now they are in a car, while in college days they used to be on a two wheeler. The wiper is cleaning the glass. He gets lost in the past memories….. the sweet college days, the sweet moments with her, dates in the restaurants, riding the two-wheeler…..“ei path jadi na shesh hoy……”
“Amar bari eshe geche…. ami ekhanei nambo.”….
she interrupts… he gets back to the present. she speaks out for the first time. He stops the car. She gets down slowly, starts moving towards the gate.
“Priya!” he asks, “tumi sukhe acho to?”
She doesn’t reply… but stops there. Turns her face towards him for the first time…it was not clear whether the flow of water on her cheek is the drops of rain or it is her tears. She again looks down and turns back and enters into the gate. He fails to make out what her silence means… he kept looking at the gate for sometime…… then leaves the place…. with no hope of meeting again.
Apnara o lekhoin na… jar jeta golpo bhala lage….
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silcharor_maiya
silcharor_maiya
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/09/04 at 21:21:50 » |
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amrao lekhmu ne aage tumar golpo ta shesh koro te..adha koile kita hoibo..tarpore kita hoilo?cheletar kita hoilo?meyeta tair family life sukhi ki na etc etc..adha sadha koile hoito nai >:( >:( >:( >:( >:( |
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confused
confused
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/10/04 at 03:13:41 » |
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Mane, plot ta to koin. Silchar, Delhi na NYC? Accordingly twist dimu ne endingo.
Rahul sighs and starts the car again. While his brand new Toyota Camry started roaring on the deserted rainsoaked road, his mind raced back in the past. He never forgot the day he saw her for the first time. Wonderful memories of HS first year. He was in Science, she was in Arts. In NERICIQ that year Raj was representing GC college team. The quiz master asked how did the group UB40 got it's name. Suddenly a slim figure jumped up and said that they got the name from Unemployment Benefit form UB40 form of Britain. Raj was charmed. He did not know it. A famous group, inventer of Regge music, attribute their name to un employment benefit form? Interesting he thought. When the eyes met, Raj felt a pang in his heart. It was love at first sight from his side and later he found out she reciprocated his feelings too.
Screeching noise of his brake brought to present again. He was about to jump a red light. |
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krishanu_bhattjee
krishanu_bhattjee
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/10/04 at 06:14:17 » |
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let's try a unique and craetive stroy...
there was a poor guy (or a rich guy)
there was a poor girl (or a rich girl)
They fall in love
Dance and music (happy)
Parents/villains protest
Dance and music (sad)
incidents
live happily ever after.(or in the next birth)
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sutirthadas
sutirthadas
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/10/04 at 09:57:05 » |
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Bah... daroon galpo... tumi sulekhak. Chaliye jao. Aami notun join korlam ei aashoray. Faatafati. |
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Sandipan Suklabaidya
Sandipan,
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/10/04 at 18:40:32 » |
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Welcome Sutirtha.... REC r bhoot er golpo shuna.... bohut din dhoriya shunchi na re...
silcharer_maiya.... story ta okhanou shesh.... Actually its a plot on which a telefilm will be made by the Students of IIMC. the story is conceptualised by three of the Creative team members( Myself & two other guys).
Anyways..thanx 4 the replies.... especially Mr.Confused 4 further extending it. hope to see more stories, twists etc...
So plz come up with your GOLPO s...
bye |
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jao_ba
jao_ba
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/11/04 at 13:54:24 » |
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let me complete sandipan's story. after going home priya kicks her hubby on the ass and says i m going with my b/f. u dont bug me anymore. get the ___ outta my life. and she gives rahul a call and says u come and pick me up. and now they are living happily together. |
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sutirthadas
sutirthadas
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/11/04 at 14:07:26 » |
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...but the problem starts now...This girl was not aware that Rahul was impotent and could not satisfy her. For months she had sleepless nights. After spending six months she decides to go back to her husband. But she finds her husband happily married again with Rahul's wife. |
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Sandipan Suklabaidya
Sandipan,
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/11/04 at 16:01:27 » |
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I 'd rather suggest to post new & innovative stories or experiences here..... especially REC r bhoot er golpo from Sutirtha.....
hope to see those soon |
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confused
confused
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/12/04 at 02:54:15 » |
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Rahul was very upset. They were drifting away from each other. He used to be very upset. His colleagues noticed it and asked him what the problem was. Rahul was very hesitant. It is not easy to discuss ones deficiencies. But he confided in his older collegue who was very helpful to him. His colleague started laughing and told him, "Have you ever heard of anything called Viagra?"
So, Rahul visits a doctor. Since then Rahul and Priya are living happily in their multy story condominium. Where no one can disturb them. Last time I heard, Priya is expecting. Oh! what a happy ending. |
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jao_ba
jao_ba
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/12/04 at 09:16:43 » |
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no the story was like this. when priya saw her hubby got married to rahul's wife, she started to think (for the first time in her life for a change). she had a few options. either convince her hubby to divorce this gal and get back to her or find a new guy. but then one thought occured to her mind. why not find a solution to the problems of rahul because he is a nice guy and they r happy together. so she arranged an appointment with dr. kutubbuddin, mbbs, md. specialized in ........ well............ummmmmmmmmmm whatever. they saw him in his clinic and he gave them the solution. and it worked. but after a few days she met with another ex of her called vishal and she could remember the nice time they had together. and then she was confused .......................... |
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Sandipan Suklabaidya
Sandipan,
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/26/04 at 12:15:36 » |
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so , is that enough? no more twist or extension guys? fyn then.
Now plz come up with a new one so that a lot of post mortem can be done
c u soon |
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Nari
Nari
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/26/04 at 18:05:28 » |
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Do you all believe in bhoot, can anyone give us a real bhoot story.I think that will be interesting what do you say Sandipan? |
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Addabaz
Addabaz
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/26/04 at 18:25:16 » |
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Hi!
Bhoot er golpo to ami jaani na....but i wuld like to share one story with you all.
amar husband r thamma r golpo. thamma agya meherpur er dike kunu jaigya thakta. too thamma rujdin oikhano tan chaggal digra ( hope u know wht is digra) dewat jaita eakta matho . oikhano besh ektu jaiga jangal er moto ashil. Eakdin thamma jokhon bikale chagal anat gashoin hotat eakta 7 thakiya 10 feet lomba saap e tanre komor thakiya pura barai laisil. r eta r mukhta ta thik tan mukher samnay ashil. tain tokhon taan chagal ita re rasit dhoriya kunu mote ghar porjonto aiwa senseless hoi gashla. tarpore saap ta ashte ashte tanre chariya gashil giya. amar o protham biswas hoisil naa je saap mukhher samne thakiya kunu kamar dilo naa. kintu ita e fact. Thamma e tarpor thakiya biswari puja korta proteek bosor jotdin bachiya ashla. Thamma r mote Biswari puja hoyar lagiya e saap ta ashil. Jani ita budhay khali bura manush rar biswas.....kintu saap e tan re kichhu korse naa. |
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Sandipan Suklabaidya
Sandipan,
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/27/04 at 20:16:39 » |
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Addabaz, miracles still happen... one just cant turn off to the fact. I too heard a lot of stories like these from my Granny...
But as far as bhoot is concerned.... NARI knows many of those... inact she has got the practical experience. TArapur er je gali t tair bari achil, oi galit shuchi bohut Bhoot- Petni achil... okhono bole dui ekta ache.... Shunchi ekta petni r naak kata (like Sarpanaha) achil.
over to NARI ;D
bye ... hope to c NARI's post soon
sandipan
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Nari
Nari
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/27/04 at 23:39:44 » |
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Oi Sandy besi bari gesos nani, dara sob mashi re koimu Silchar giya. Tadpode tui aar Silchar aite paros ni dekhbe. Bhavis na ami tore dhamki diram ami ita kormu.
Oboishyo tore dush diya lub nai , manush besi din ekla thakle ektu budhoy scru dhila emnei hoijai..........tui bujhre to ami kita koite sairum. |
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lonewolf
lonewolf
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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02/29/04 at 22:42:07 » |
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So Mr confused I thought of a better ending..here it goes....
......so it was the cold February night..the rain had stopped and the road was empty and wet...it was quite windy outside and he could feel the cold moist air blowing into his face..the road was lit by the neon lights..these lights reflected the night and the quite grievance inside him...it was 20 past 10.. he put on the radio in his car..93FM was playing G'n'R 's Sweet Child O'Mine ..he began humming the lines...
Sweet Child O' Mine
She's got a smile that it seems to me
Reminds me of childhood memories
Where everything
Was as fresh as the bright blue sky
Now and then when I see her face
She takes me away to that special place
And if I stared too long
I'd probably break down and cry
Sweet child o' mine
Sweet love of mine
She's got eyes of the bluest skies
As if they thought of rain
I hate to look into those eyes
And see an ounce of pain
Her hair reminds me of a warm safe place
Where as a child I'd hide
And pray for the thunder
And the rain
To quietly pass me by
Sweet child o' mine
Sweet love of mine
Where do we go
Where do we go now
Where do we go
Sweet child o' mine
Sweet child o'mine....he was home by this time....
HE SAW HIS WIFE AT THE ENTRANCE.... WAITING ANXIOUSLY FOR HIM
HE KISSED HER....HE WAS FEELING A STRANGE WARMTH INSIDE HIM
HE WAS HAPPY TO BE HOME
THE END
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Sandipan Suklabaidya
Sandipan,
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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03/01/04 at 09:50:48 » |
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yeah... indeed a happy ending... its time for a new beginning.
Nari hotaht gorom hoi gelo kene? ??? mthat dush ni?
bye 4 now
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Nari
Nari
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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03/01/04 at 18:28:43 » |
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I'm giving bhooter golpo.
Golpo holao satti
Ekdin amar baba school thakia ghore dike rowana hoisuin( school mane he was a teacher) Tokhon amar babar age khub beshi hoile 25 batshar. oi samay amar dadur bari asil Kashipur bagano, amar dadu baganer doctor asla, aiccha ita jetai e hoik mul storyt iram. To amar baba school sesh koria bandhurar sange adda maria Silchar thakia cycle e rowana hoisuin baganer dike,tokhon ratre noyta baje. Koto dur awar pore tain dekhoin ki tan cycle er upre dui ta kala kala lamba lamba hath, pratham tain bhavsoin tan budhoy bramh hor kintu jokhonhaath dui ta bar bar aar tokhon tain doraigesoin. Samne dekhsoin ekta char stall aar ita samne koekta manushe taash kheler , tain cycle thamaiya oikhano gela. Tadpode tarare koila sab ghotona. Sab shuniya tara koilo ki ikhano to irakam hoi, ei jega ta beshi bhala nai kintu baba e tokhon koila je ami to ruj din ei dike ai kunu din to irokom hoise na aaj ke pratham. Tokhontara koilo afne lucky je oto din pore afne dekhsoin naile je ei dike pratham din jai he o dekhe. Babar to gham baror , tadpode kunumote cycle chaliya barit gela , giya dadure sab koila. Dadue koila kalke thaki oniyo rasta dikhe jiys. Porer din baba e bhavla je awar samay oniyo dikhe aimu ne okhon idikhe u jigiya. Tadpode arek ta ajob jinish hoilo gotokalke tain je char staller samne thamsila ekhano kunu char stall e nai. Tain samne ekjon re paiya jigaila je ekhano je char stall asil ita gelo koi, tokhon manush tai koilo ikhano to kunudin kunu char stall asil na.
Hoilo goppo sesh. |
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lonewolf
lonewolf
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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03/02/04 at 07:59:46 » |
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Fundooo story to....ita mane BHOOT ra o CHA khai....
kita TATA na TETLY ;D ;D
Plz dont mind Nari its just a joke.....
so carry on with your bloodcurdling and bone chilling BHOOT stories....... :-X :-X
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Nari
Nari
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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03/02/04 at 17:17:29 » |
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Expecting more replies. I think my story was not that exciting that's why so less replies......isn't it?
Now you all come up with more stories not neccessarily bhoot ones but may be other interesting ones. |
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Sandipan Suklabaidya
Sandipan,
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Re: GOLPO r aasor
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03/03/04 at 08:58:05 » |
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Nari, ur story was okey...but we were more interested in the NAKKATA PETNIr golpo.... thats why the replies r not that entusiastic..
Well, continuing the BHOOT er golpo......
I had a few friends in REC (NIT)silchar.... oneday one of them narrtaed his experience of seeing a bhoot in theREC campus. Accordng to him... he , wit some of his friends went out for a walk after dinner. while walking they unmindfully kept entering to the interior parts of the campus...a fmanous spot "lovers' lane". suddenly they saw a human like objct covered top to bootom with a white cloth. It was moving. Not really walking but moving. and gradualy vanished.
We made somany joke out of that, like... "ganja kahiya gechle ni? koi botol ultaichos ? " etc tec. but they didn't seem to b lying. So we decided to trace out the fact. We planed to go there at night. accordingly, we went there one night. Took our diner at he hostel and ater that went out for "MISSION BHOOT". but we kept walking and walking but didn't find any of them. We searched there tilll 2 o'clock midnight.. but probably they (BHOOTS) realized we were more dangerous han them...
so ....any coments giys? |
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